Dismal dame of doom and despair,
Dotty am I
and dotty I am;
daily, dutifully, dumbly
I drip my mundane dross into the ether
as each new day drags itself forth
into drab dawns,
indisputably, undelightfully drear.
I died, didn’t I?
Death dragged me to his dominions
and dumped me here
to deadhead his daisies,
damned me for days unending
to his dire displays of despicable
and indescribable woes.
The view from here is foul,
designed to devastate —
our war-dogs lie dead in deserts
their bodies dust-dried in the heat,
driven there by the dupery
of our dictators and despots
determined to decimate and destroy.
Down in dystopia, devils drink
from the dire ditch of disdain
while demons and damsels
with dirty diseases,
dank and heartsick,
drown in deprivation and despond,
decaying docilely
to the booming, beating din
of Death’s deafening drum.
The dead and the done for,
the sick and the starved,
devoured, disconsolate,
disparaged, doomed to damnation
by devious, demented
denouncements of decency.
I dream of a deity,
undreadful, undeterred,
worthy of devotion,
disciplined, driven, deft,
disposed to disarm and deny tyrants
their delusions of demigod status;
a divinity who deigns to descend
from his detachment
to lay his indebted, duteous hand on mankind.
But the damage is done,
(was done, long ago),
and it will devastate
with doubt, dismay, distrust,
and floods of blood
for all generations to come.
I died, didn’t I?
Didn’t we all?
deelaytful
/ April 16, 2012Great use of alliteration!
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear deelaytful,
Dank you. 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
Madame Weebles
/ April 16, 2012Dear Dotty,
I dig your deep, dark discourse on doom, death and destruction. Danke.
xoxo Mme Weebles
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear Mme Weebles,
Dank you for digging da discourse.
Love Dotty xxx
davidreidart
/ April 16, 2012Dark delight!
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear David,
Dank you.
Love Dotty xxx
pouringmyartout
/ April 16, 2012You should do this as a rap song… or sing it to some German oompah music. You could have a hit on your hands…
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear pmao,
Did you ever hear a song called Da Da Da by a German group called Trio? You’ve just reminded me of it. 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
pouringmyartout
/ April 16, 2012I live to serve… but no, I never heard of them. You Europeans are so advanced and so primitive at the same time.
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear pmao,
That’s what makes us so charming.
Love Dotty xxx
pouringmyartout
/ April 16, 2012I couldn’t agree more…
pouringmyartout
/ April 16, 2012Like the way you always say dear pmao and Love Dotty xxx
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear pmao,
I like to address people properly. I also like to punch them so I’m a prime example of the truth of your comment 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
pouringmyartout
/ April 16, 2012God save the Queen!
chancedagger
/ April 16, 2012Best Easter poem I ever hope to read!
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear Dags,
Dank you.
Love Dotty xxx
P.S. I like how all the people whose names or nicknames begin with D are commenting. Diddly doo.
chancedagger
/ April 16, 2012Damned dark, dreadfully dramatic, and dottyesque, dearie
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear Dags,
Dilly Dilly Daydream
drank a drop of drink
Dilly Dilly Daydream
fell dead into the sink
Love Dotty xxx
chancedagger
/ April 17, 2012Little Dotty
With a shout
Gouged the baby’s
Eyeballs out,
Stamped on them
To make them pop.
Mother said,
“Now Dotty stop!”
Little Dotty
On a trip
Pushed her best friend
Off a cliff.
Teacher screamed,
“Dotty, why?”
Dotty said,
“She loves to fly.”
Little Dotty —
Little sinner —
Poisoned her poor
Family’s dinner.
From the docket
Dolly cried,
“Coincidental suicide!”
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear Dags,
WHO ARE YOU SPYING FOR?
HOW DO YOU KNOW SO MUCH?
Love Dotty xxx
Veggiewitch
/ April 16, 2012Dearest Dotty,
Oh! This is bliss!
Heartfelt and dear.
Much love,
Veggiewitch ♥
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear Veggiewitch,
Dank you, dearie.
Love Dotty xx
owl
/ April 16, 2012Dear Dotty,
Wonderful. I especially like Death’s daisies (wonderful! artful incongruity; and it’s a bit spectacular that you got to deadhead his daisies, no? I am obsessed with this image), and the allusion to Auden. Wonderful.
Love,
Owl
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear owl,
Dank you.
Daisy, daisy, give me your answer do. 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
owl
/ April 16, 2012Dear Dotty,
It inspired me. Now I have to decide how much experimenting with dosages I might be able to get away with.
Love,
Owl
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear owl,
Don’t dabble with dosages or dire death will darken your door.
Love Dotty xxx
PAZ
/ April 16, 2012Dear Dotty,
Damn! Dis be deliciously, diabolically delectable!
Dow I detter do my duties. Dye, Dye.
Dove xoxoxo
PAZ
/ April 16, 2012Dots and dots of Dove! xoxoxoxxx
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 16, 2012Dear PAZ,
Why doesn’t PAZ begin with D?
Love Dotty xxx
Dear Daz
I can’t write this, it sounds like I’m writing to a brand of washing powder.
Love Dotty xxx
Dear PAZ,
Dank you derry duch. 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
kzackuslheureux
/ April 16, 2012Dear Dotty,
You dig deep, the depths of my devotion 😉
Love Alphabet
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear Alphabet,
Dank you, darling. 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
judithatwood
/ April 17, 2012Dear Dotty,
I can’t think of any interesting alliteration for this comment — It’s been sitting here half written all day long. This is a very beautiful and poignant poem. Really lovely.
Love,
Judith
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear Judith,
Dank you, dearest. 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
judithatwood
/ April 17, 2012Dear Dotty,
You are, of course, most welcome, my dear friend. I appreciate seeing your poetry in these posts! Love you 😎
Judith
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear Judith,
😎 Love you too 😎
Love Dotty xxx
BuddhaKat
/ April 17, 2012Dear Dotty…
dashdotdot-dotdash-dashdash-dashdot, dashdotdot-dotdot-dotdotdotdash-dotdash,
dashdotdot-dotdash-dashdash-dashdot!!!
🙂
danet
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear danet,
dot
dot
dot
dash
dash
dot
🙂
Love Dotty xxx
tadams4u
/ April 17, 2012Dang Dotty. Definatly Dottish
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear Brick,
Ding dong! 🙂
Love Dotty xxx
saradraws
/ April 17, 2012Dear Dotty,
Your poem is long, but I read most of it anyway. It was very good, and I don’t like poems. This just shows how much I like you. Which is a lot.
Cheerio,
Sara
Dotty Headbanger
/ April 17, 2012Dear DrawingSara
Dank you.
Love Dotty xxx